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Bleeding Dreams

It bleeds, bleeds and bleeds.The blood-drops, cavernous.My hand is stained,My soul is tainted.But where do I bleed?A deadly maze thrust into me,Throwing me deeper into its duality,Drenching me In its...

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I enjoyed this poem. It has some really incredible imagery. I like your use of words like "acidic" and "bile" because it really reflects the bitterness and sharp pain of the experience. My only...

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Hi Beener Thanks so much for the critique. About using mother's words, I will think about it. Thanks for the suggestions and your encouraging words. Keep smiling. Happy writing.RegardsMary

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This is a harrowing piece of writing...a tragedy on the page...such a sad story...a very moving piece, and a tough subject to write about, I suspect...It bleeds, bleeds and bleeds.The blood-drops,...

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Hi Soulsease Thank you for your help. You have raised so many interesting, valid questions. : The blood-drops, cavernous.I agree that "cavernous" isn't the right word. I will rephrase it. Like, "The...

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